i think this film was produced well , although editing wise the transitions were not as smooth

I like all the different shots that were used and the message is very important. My only suggestion is to add background music. :)

I think this was well underproduced. I wish the girl would have contributed more.

I think this film overall was pretty good but probably could have pushed the message of phone addiction a little better.

Aside from the audio, this PSA is ok. My favorite character is the guy with the pink hat. He's definitely the funniest out of all three. This PSA does a poor way of conveying the dangers of phone addiction; instead of showing us how phones can be harmful, it's just a short line of dialogue. By far the funniest part is the end where the girl bumps into the doorway and just says "ow". My advice: avoid using warp stabilizer and don't record under the AC. The thumbnail was pretty good.