I think the "Sleep PSA" film is in need of some improvement. First off, the audio needs to be louder, as I could barely hear the actors. Secondly, the actors, in my opinion, acted silly in scenes that should have been taken seriously (i.e. the scene where the person gets fired from his job). Also, a few of the scenes were too dark (keep lighting in mind!). With all (but not limited to) these suggestions, your PSA would improve immensely.

This PSA has a simple but important message. The acting is very over done, but it is easy to see the goal of the PSA. Overall, it was effective in getting its purpose across.

i think this flim is interesting

acting needed a little work

I think this film is cool and i really like the acting.