I like that you tried adding multiple of the same characters in the same screen. You took risks and that is great!

I really enjoyed your film man. You made me laugh. I loved in your opening shots, what you were doing with the practical lamp. That was awesome. Go back and look at that shot and then later when you came back to it and the lamp was off. There's a HUGE difference in the quality of your film. What a great example to be able to see the difference in one film. Taking that concept and by applying that in every single shot you would add so much to your film. Great honing your sills man.

A really fun concept here and you executed it pretty well. You on occasion crossed over the line so that it ruined your allusion but for the most part you got it and it worked. I love watching comedy because if it works you really can get away with a lot of technical issues because your audience will forgive you. Good job there. Now add some lighting elements to your work. take the time to really light your subject to give more depth to your characters. Good work though.

I like the idea of this and the execution is pretty decent. The exposure of the film was okay but the lighting could have told the story better. For instance, it could have been filmed in the evening so it felt like the main character had been trying all day and was running out of time. This would have offered up a great canvas to paint the room with light and get really creative. The ending was awesome though. Made me laugh out loud.

This was a clever concept that worked pretty well. The lighting wasn't bad but it also wasn't great. It appears that the filmmakers just found a well-lit room and set up the camera there. The writing wasn't bad either but it could have been tighter and more creative. I like these filmmakers and am looking forward to seeing what they make next.