This PSA is done pretty well and communicates it's message adequately. Now I'd like to challenge you to push the visuals. Consider what angles can communicate the feelings that this person might be feeling: Loneliness, out of balance, sad etc. Communicate these in the visuals: make your subject very small in the frame (alone), frame her to the very far right of frame (an unsettling framing), tip the framing to be not level (portrays unstable life). Things like this will raise your shows level.

You've got some positive things going for you here. Nice cutting on the action. Editing I think is the strength to this piece. You've also got some nice angles that add some uniqueness to the piece. Now, really focus on the the details and you're production value overall will really be much higher. Don't just use the existing light. Add lighting to your piece even if it's just using practical lights. It will really create emotion. Having a shallow depth of field would really add a lot.

Great choice for a message of a PSA. This is a big problem with teens and one that needs to be focused on so thank you very much for picking this message to get out to the world. Your execution was also pretty well done. You used a nice variety of angles which was refreshing and with all those angles you were able to cut it together nicely. A quick suggestion that I might have for you is to now start using lighting to help tell your story. It will make a huge difference in how it looks.

You had some shots in this and I really liked the elements you added like the scrolling screen and the text. The editing could have been a bit tighter. You could have cut a bit out of the head and tails of several shots. The exposure looks like it could have been a bit better but I really liked the piece overall.

I really liked this message. Too many young people are affected too much by people they hardly know, bullying them online. I would have loved it if she would have just turned off her phone and walked away. Thats what they need to do. Interesting angles and you did a great job of telling your story without saying anything. Nicely done.