The writing on this project stands out above all its other attributes. The viewer can tell that the writer spent some time researching and getting a few of the facts out in a way that would be very visually convincing. Great Job. I think this team could have spent a bit more time getting some real cinematic shots of hydration and people drinking. It is after all, a Cinematography Challenge. Still I give them high marks cause it works.

Your visuals matched your message and made good points. You should try using a tripod for steadier shots. I appreciate that you spent some time crafting a smart script. All too often students skip this portion of the process and it ALWAYS shows. As a last note, you've got a pretty darn good golf swing. Keep it up!

You PSA is defiantly on the right path. You've got some nice elements in it, I would just suggest more of it and thinking a little more creative with your shots. Have more shots. Instead of coming back to the same shot of you drinking water, put yourself in different situations drinking water. Have more shots of you playing different sports. Add camera movement to some of your shots...its as easy as sitting in an office chair with he camera and slightly being pushed. It's good. Just go further

Nice work here. You gave some interesting fact that I didn't already know which was nice and your script was pretty well thought out. I would have like to have seen a little more creativity from a cinematography stand point: choosing more interesting backgrounds and composition. For example: shooting the water bottle. Instead of just shooting straight on against white, pick a more interesting setting and then add a slow camera move. Nice effort.

Overall I enjoyed your PSA. You did a fairly good job disseminating the information and the importance of drinking water. I really liked the shot you did of the golf swing and would loved to have seen a few more shots like that. B-roll is so important to communicating the message of your PSA. It would have been pretty simple to get several more shots of you doing different sports and would have really added to the production value. Nice work.