You picked a great message for your PSA so now you just need to spend a little more time writing your script to give your message a little more depth. Once you have a great script then your visuals will be easy. Your visuals are a little repetitive and a good script will help avoid that also. Keep up the good work.

I love the idea of doing a PSA on the subject of kindness. It's a very positive message and is very much needed in the world. You captured it. I just want more.

https://www.passiton.com/inspirational-stories-tv-spots/170-humble-and-kind

Take a look at this PSA on kindness. They chose to highlight many different examples of kindness. I would have like to have seen a few more examples of kindness in your PSA. There are so many great examples to choose form. Keep making films. You're on your wa

Great topic and great set up for kindness. Including others is a perfect message. I love how that was your focus now I ask you how can you include other examples of including others. Seeing the one example is good but the kicking of the ball got a little to repetitive for me. I wanted to see more. You want to always be ahead of your audience and if they get tired of what you're showing them you lose them and once you lose them it's hard to get them back. Just give me more. Write in more.

The message of this PSA is very thoughtful. I liked it quite a bit. I think these young filmmakers are on their way. Once they get a few filmmaking basics under their belts. Keep on trying, team. I think there are great things ahead of you.

This is a simple PSA that delivers it's message well. It feels a bit like they just went out to have fun and complete a school assignment, and there's nothing wrong with that. Making movies should be fun. I'll be curious to see them continue to tell stories and see where this team goes with their talent.