I thought this film had a great idea and emotion connected towards it but just had some little details to work on

I think this film was very average

I think the film could of had better angles and a more slowed pace. Overall it got the message through.

I think this film got the message it was trying to convey. Using the resources that they had I think they executed there point of the PSA. My only complaint I have is that they should have faded between the shot of her and the title sequence and that the camera to be a little more in focus if possible.

For an inspiring tale about persistence and of course encouragement, this story is simple and direct with its theme. It's definitely stronger in its editing and cinematography. I really like the dolly shot in the beginning, and encourage you to use various dynamic rather than static shots. The sound of the guitar is crisp, however, at times the sound wouldn't perfectly match the motion. Not too distracting, but would clean up the editing. Overall, a concise and sweet story.