My life has been wasted.

Has a good concept to it, but it is very made awful.

I think this film could be better in every way, like the Editing, if they added way more shots then they would have more to edit with. But at the same time the film just kinda becomes a mess.

I think the film was okay, it needs a little bit of improvement with the transition and cutting scenes.

I want to give the camera quality a pass. But the acting wasn't convincing and it has ruff audio. But audio is heard to come by. So, I'll that a pass. I do recommend taking a approach of silent film apoarch. Make it interesting and work on the lighting to give a nice look. Yes, the camera quilty isn't good but that shouldn't stop you from making it better. Always room for improvements.