You managed to get the point across with what you were saying so good writing! Though there was a sound and audio problem as I couldn't hear one person and there was a background noise. Though when it comes to quality and lighting, that was great! I could see the actors and wasn't over exposed.

I think that you guys could've done better on the sound, I couldn't hear what you guys were saying most of the time. The constant up shots would not be my first choice. I did think the script was good though I liked the mustache line.

This film wasn't a good example of the film structure. The quality wasn't good but the mask interpretation did show.

The writing was direct and had elements that were entertaining.

The director had solid foundations laid out for the film.

The editing made the film have solid pacing. One thing I don't like is the exposure that was being films could have been lowered because the lights in the hallway were creating a reflection on the camera lens that was distracting.

I really enjoy the use of motion in one shot. The inconsistent locations of people after cuts can be distracting.

You did wonderful on the filming, directing, and writing of this film. The actors also did an amazing job! The editing still needs some work, however, I do notice that the editor did improve in some aspects, like the animated text near the beginning. I believe in your work and improvements! You’ve got this!