I think this film was very informative and would be good to use on social media but i'm not sure about it being a film.

This film has some excellent information on the problems that fluoride toothpaste can cause, but fails to keep my interest when watching. The memes that were overlaid on the video can certainly be funny in the right context, but the audio was far too loud and drowned out the focus of the video. Instead of memes, for your next draft you can show some evidence or pictures showing damage that fluoride toothpaste causes. The cinematography was nothing special, because this is a very casual video.

I like that he was is very enthusiastic and had energy however, it would have been better if he spoke more clear and structured his PSA to where the point came across clearer. I thought the memes on his video were funny I did think they were too loud and it did clash with what he was saying, so I think he should mix his audio but again I thought they were funny. I really like that he compared two brands I didn't like the set up. I like the outro but could but could be shorter.

The message of the film is clear. However, the film is in one take and the actor is reading from a computer. This could be improved by having a clear script and editing out the repetition. The actor has a good personality. It seems like he may just need more direction on how to make an engaging and informative film.

First thing I noticed was the vertical video. Unless you're posting this to social media pages, vertical video is a big NO-NO. I personally don't use toothpaste with fluoride so I appreciated this PSA. I felt the host wasn't completely prepared to deliver the message and was searching for facts and reasons why fluoride was bad for you. He should have rehearsed a bit and learned his lines. The exposure was decent though, and the audio was nice and clear.