I thought you did a great job with your opening title sequence and the closing scene. The end scene was nice and intimate with your shooting style. I could see your characters and the emotions they were sharing with each other. Your editing there was also well done.

Nice opening title sequence. Well thought out and super creative. I like what you have going on with your characters but I'd like more coverage of them and close ups of your characters. If you don't have time to get the coverage which means doing the scene two and three times then really block your scene so that your characters move around to the camera or the camera moves around the actors. Get the faces of the characters in the lens. Spielberg is a master at this.

Great opening title sequence! Very creative and executed with grace. Love it. You've got a great concept here...a great dilemma but you're falling short on the coverage of your scenes which doesn't allow us to get into the story and the characters. Most of your scenes are covered with one shot and maybe two but you really have to give the audience a close up of your characters otherwise they'll feel nothing for the characters. You have potential, just need to take the time to tell the story.

Well told story. I just felt the acting was a little forced.

Great performances! These young filmmakers had me sucked in and I stopped tracking the technical aspects of the film. I had to watch it a second time for the craft. I liked the color you had in the film and how simple the setups were, very Nora Efron. I really liked this film and the storyline.