I think these filmmakers did a good job of building up to that last moment when the girl shows up in the news room. The scenes were well thought out and I liked how they used their school broadcast stage. The lighting and audio could have had more attention paid to them however. I think the strongpoint of this little film is the writing.

The idea behind this project is pretty solid. The problem begins when filmmakers try to tell stories that are written for older actors. It's the first thing that pulls me out of a story. The cinematography could have used some lighting. Most of the interior shots were underexposed. That ending moment works well but could have been extended a bit.

You've got the start of a good idea here. You just need to spend more time developing it. Really lay out the beats on paper so that you can see the arc of your story. You'll really be able to see where the holes are and where the stories working. Development will really make a huge difference to your films. Keep making films...with every film my make you'll get better each time.

I really enjoyed this story. Simple and complex. Great acting and production work

The writing of this film stands out. As do the performances. There were a few editing bumps and some audio issues, but I was really brought into the story when the two see each other. The filmmakers really made me feel something, which is what movies are all about. Well done!