You have a great idea here, it just needs to be fleshed out further and then when you shoot, really plan out exactly what you're going to shoot. It feels like you sort of went into it and just shot what you thought would be funny vs. thinking about how to make that montage work towards the progression (whether forwards or backwards) of your characters. Keep honing your process.

You've got a clever idea here and something that is very much up the Nora Ephron alley so the idea is good. On the execution I would have like to have seen him actually get better and better at it vs. always falling all over him self. A little like Groundhog day, he should have gotten better at it and started to figure out the nuances that would get him the girl. That would have been a better and more enjoyable story arc. Good work though. Keep making films.

The storyline behind this little film is really fun and would make an interesting film. A 50 First Dates, type of thing. There were a few too many attempts that were too similar to ones previously attempted. Some lighting would have made it a lot better as well, but all in all it really worked. .

This is a fun film with great acting and shot selection

This was a really clever concept that would make an interesting feature film. The different ways our hero attempted to connect to his romantic costar were a bit repetitive. I think more time could have been spent trying to think of new ways to have him approach her. The audio was decent, as was the cinematography. It was also cut pretty well. It's an overall solid little flim.