Very nice and entertaining film. Really shows how some of us who brainstorm ideas always have a ruff time to decide which ideas to go with. Acting is not bad.

It is ok - You might want to refrain from the "alcohol, bar" mode - due to the fact that you have high school students reviewing this short.

hUh... please. stop. soup.

I think this film had a good story line by the editing and acting could use some work.

Clever film, with great cinematography. It just needs better audio quality, and there had been a little to much editing in the beginning.

This is a great example of great writing! I wish they had better microphones cause the performances were hurt because of almost great audio. When a filmmakers reach this level, we have to expect more from their films. The reviews have to get a bit more picky. The cinematography could have been better but it's so hard to do great work on a timeline like this. Great job and what a great execution of a great little script.

I think this film was very creative and eye catching. I love it and it was incredible. The acting was spot on. Keep shooting.

Overall, this piece isn't bad. The strongest points in my eyes are the writing and quality of the actor(s). The overall vision of what the guy is thinking of isn't quite clear, but the well composed shot make up for slight confusion at the end of the film. Overall, this piece did well, i wished for just a little bit more.

The characters are a little over the top but I think it really played well into the whole concept of the piece. It was thought provoking but lacked a fulfilling outcome.

This project was well conceived and had a fun concept behind it. I think the acting could have been a little less "over-the-top". Still, the cinematography was decent and again, the concept was great.

This was a clever film about what it's like to be inside someone's head when they're being creative. Good cinematography but the audio left something to be desired. Still, the concept was fun and well executed.