Where is the Suspense Thriller ?? Distraction - ?
Camera work - Good
Lighting - Good

Looking for a little more - need to be afraid, scared, spooked, terrified.

Excellently shot and edited. Well-acted sequencing... but it felt like a cheat ending for a syrup high alternative. Beautiful work though, you just need a slight rewrite.

The Cinematography is well done, a few areas to work on with framing. but other wise everything was in sharp focus when needed to be. the editing was well thought out and executed however the story line was a bit vague. I couldn't tell if the story was focused on getting a assignment or job report turned in or Dr. Pepper keeping you awake the whole time. other wise I thought it was job well done

I enjoyed this film. The script was fun and acting spot on. Video and audio looked great

This film had some really creative edits and film work. However, they did not help build any suspense. Actually not sure how the story played into the theme overall. Acting was good, but stakes weren't high enough. Music was appropriate and other technical elements were done well. Sound was good.