had lots of cool shots there were a few moments where i kinda lost what was going on but it was still a pretty good film!

Nice focus on music here. You're choices really helped set up the premise and feel for the short. I would have like to see more focus on lighting and camera work. Really look to tighten up your editing too. Trim the heads and tales of each short. Nice work. Keep honing your skills.

balance the audio - be consistent throughout -so you can hear the actors
Color balance -
balance lighting - inside hotel rooms
watch for the jump cuts -
it takes a while to get to the suspenseful part of the story

This film shows us the dangers of vacation with quick camera shots and a good story

This film had a good story but wasn't very clear on what it wanted to be. Tension was built is spots but quickly dissipated. Plot points had some holes so wasn't clear what was happening. Music juxtaposed the action. Some continuity issues but overall editing was solid. Nice use of exteriors which enhanced scenic quality. Acting was uneven but good.

A good story with real suspense