Your footage was pretty well exposed and had some good emotion. I liked how simple your setups were, but I didn't get a lot of Coppola coming through.

I like that you went big here and attempted to tackle tough emotions. You have a great concept here it's just a matter of really spending a bit more time in development and sticking to the story structure. You only have 5 minutes so what can you do in the first 1.5 minutes to establish the characters. Doing a long shot on the couch...there might be a better situation that could build your characters more. Maybe seeing that last moment with her mother. Every second counts. Nice work.

Very well written. Strong acting choices specifically from two on bench. Well balanced scene. Some framing issues distracted a bit. Nice choices with underscore. Well done.

Great story with good use of dialog. Production elements were also good.

There was some great coverage in this film. You guys really covered your scenes well and it made your editing much better than most. The script was a little hard to follow at first cause the cop didn't tell us what had happened. The acting was decent but could have used some rehearsals to really find those moments.