I really like the concept of this piece. It had some great little moments throughout the film, but ultimately didn't quite connect the dots together. It's a really hard thing to tackle and this team did a pretty decent job of coming up with this idea. The one thing that threw me was the guy taking a drink while forming a foundation... was he drunk when he hit the kid? It wasn't clear, but it felt strange in the moment.

Good story to this film. Nice use of the Narrator and production elements.

Good all around. some framing of shots could be a bit tighter to pull the emotion of the drama together. Audio could use some more music to help set the right mood of the story as well.

Good story, unevenly acted. Sound was unbalanced and inconsistent. Some scenes were washed out and there was difficulties evening out shadows. Cuts were appropriate.

You have an interesting concept here and with a bit more development with your screenplay you could really have something here. As of not it doesn't flow as well as it could. Next time really workshop the development phase more and you'll be surprised how much your storytelling will improve. Keep making films.