Nice work. Your strength was your transitions. I was quite impressed with how well they worked. Very creative. That being said, I would have like to have seen you spend a little more time in development and really hone in the script quite a bit more. The idea is a good one, you just need to flesh it out.

A good story although with some pretty big holes. Shots were well executed, however some uneven camera work, especially in the beginning. Lighting was unbalanced and somewhat distracting. Acting was inconsistent, but overall did not distract. Really enjoyed the Transformation at the end.

The Camera work got better as the story progressed. Acting was on par. Story was well written. Good Job over all

Great story line for this film. The use of transition is terrific and the cinematography is done well too.

There are some really fun transitions that work extremely well in this piece. The angles are also really well placed. Your exposures are also really good and consistent, not something we see every day. The script felt a little clumsy at times between story beats and probably would have been corrected in time.