Good effort here. I like where you're going with this idea. You could just use a bit more development and preproduction to make your screenplay stronger along with really storyboarding it out to improve the look and feel of the film. Keep making films and you'll get better with every one.

A lot of potential lies in the film, but it comes up short in a lot of areas. Blocking was poorly executed, which led to some awkward edits. Script had good intentions but was not fully executed. Sound was unbalanced and off. Camera work was shaky. Perhaps some more preproduction would have really helped and some rehearsal with the actors so that they wouldn't break while being filmed. Good effort.

Good story idea. Watch audio levels throughout the film

Need a little more enthusiasm in the acting. Well.... a lot more. Camera work is okay, it's heading in the right direction. The story is on good principle. good job.

The mom character was entertaining. I think the edits could have been tightened up a bit. It would have made it feel smoother. The story was simple but endearing.