You have an interesting concept here and you got pretty good coverage of the narrative. I would have liked to have seen you take more time to light and rehearse your actors. Those two things could really increase the production value and the overall story exponentially. Keep making films.

Had a difficult time following story. Edits were uneven felt like they were forced. Camera work was inconsistent. Lighting was good, but felt there could have been some music to underscore some scenes. Overall piece just felt rushed.

Great idea for a film. Audio a little low, but other production elements were good.

Don't give up on your hopes and dream and don't drop out.
Got some good camera work there, but needs a little help. Audio has some very low points in the middle. Acting and Direction needs some attention. But other wise good effort with this short.

I love the message of this picture. Hard work can often overtake even the best and most creative talent. I didn't see a lot of Coppola in the directing style, but the writing wasn't bad. There is definitely some potential with this team.