I really like the locations you chose. They fit your character and the setting of the story. The lighting gets a bit too incandescent at times on the people, which if corrected would have sent this film much higher in the ratings. The writer has talent and should continue to develop their gifts.

Nice job here. Great choice of location and I like your camera work. I also like your effort to light and really paint the cinematic picture. I really enjoyed your well thought out transitions. I also noticed and appreciated your efforts with the sound design (I would have softened your snaps a little but great effort there). Once you do the sound design then take your film into a final mix and really balance all the sounds...dialogue, music,sound effects, etc. Keep up the good work.

Nice story. Some plot holes but nothing that hurts the story. Creative camera work, with use of multiple angles. Some of the angles didn't really work, but it was nice to see them being attempted. Edits were a little distracting but overall, well done. Lighting was uneven, but I especially liked the phone call crossover.

Very nice story with a feel good ending. Nice Cinematography.

Good Cinematography. Nice intro GFX. Story was there for her to break out of her shell of shyness. Audio needed work. and some editing issues to tighten up. But great job overall!

I was really captivated by the look of this film. Every frame was exposed really well, and the way you moved the camera from one scene to the next was very powerful. The script could have used some polish, but I'm super impressed with this team.