FIlm had a great inspiring story. Watch audio levels and transitions.

I really liked the message behind this film. The story beats were all there and it is well told. I think some of the locations could have been better selected to keep the audience in the film. I liked the replay so we could see that is was her brother. Nice touch.

The writing and Direction is pointed in the right direction with this short. The cinematography and editing were effective and well put together.

Nice premise for a script although with some plot holes. Sound mix was a bit off, dialogue was often too low under music, while music was uneven. Lighting was pretty flat and would have really helped underscore the mood if used properly. Some scenes were pretty dark. Overall real nice effort.

You have a nice concept here and I like the potential of your story here. I like the themes you've chosen and all your efforts to tell that story. A few areas that I love to see you stretch a little further would be in lighting, casting and your blocking. Holding auditions or taping into actors of your theater department isn't always easy but really makes a difference if you could do that on the next go around. Then really take your time as you're filming and telling the story. Nice effort!