Great pacing with your opening. Love the music and how you finished your opening. Well done. Great color timing and nice work with the lighting you used. You have a great concept here. I would love to see you dive a bit deeper in development to create a bit more depth to your story and the arc. Building the narrative so that the transition from the bad life to understanding each other is a bit more gradual. That should be your whole second act and it happens super quick. Keep up the good work.

Well written film with a few plot holes. The music in this really distracted from the story. It didn't really play nicely with the mood and was really overpowering at times. Most dialogue was drowned out by it as well. A little disappointing because the film had much potential.

Colorful! Good Cinematography, use of lights and editing. Made for a unique and effective story. The Acting was very nice and realistic.

I think this film has a great story and many good production aspects. Please watch audio levels and transitions.

This team of young filmmakers did a great job in every category. It was written well, shot well, acted well, and directed well. Just a solid performance all around. If I had to pick one thing that stood out, I'd say the cinematography. I could tell you guys knew what you wanted to achieve and really went for it. Well done.