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average rating is 3.1 out of 5

Comedy

2023

Lawn

Noah wants to help his community be a better place after seeing a lawn that doesn't look super nice, but he soon runs into trouble from some other kids who are mowing peoples lawns for pay.

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So Good, But What Happened?

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average rating is 3.3 out of 5

When the film first starts I thought this was going to be one of the best things on the Lot. But as it went on it feels like it lost it's footing. The whole story shifts to a different direction and a different story. It still manages to pull it out in the end. The editing is great, but the sound could be better.

Lawn Wars!

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average rating is 3.3 out of 5

This film was upbeat and fast moving. I enjoyed the acting and story line. Just wanted more for the ending.

A Good Turn Daily

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average rating is 3.3 out of 5

I liked the message of this film. It had a great sense of style and tone that was subtle and understated. This team did everything really well and had a good concept to boot. Some of the acting was forced and brought the points down a touch, but the directing and cinematography were both quite strong.

Lawn Reveiw

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average rating is 4.7 out of 5

I wanted to see what happens next!! Very well done, The story had an excellent flow to it. The Cinematography was on point. The editing was nice, (maybe dial back the long cross dissolves) Acting was done well. Lighting at night is done very well, with nothing too under-exposed or over-exposed. Excellent job!

Making Good

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average rating is 2 out of 5

Great work. You had me smiling from the beginning. GREAT opening title sequence. You really created a feel to your film which in turn translated to the character. Great shots. Great lighting and you had some great action. Now for the details...make sure that ever decision is a conscious one...the door falling, what were you trying to say with that creative choice. Is his character flawed? or did it just happen and you kept it. Spend a little more time in development to polish but great job.

Mowed Over

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average rating is 3.2 out of 5

Fight seen well staged. Edits clean. Nice acting choices. Music choices on target but a little unbalanced with sound. Real nice job building tension. Confused on abrupt ending.

Lawn Started Strong But Ended Slow

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average rating is 2 out of 5

I really wanted to like this and when it first started I thought, whoa... we have a winner. But then the story fell apart about half way into it.

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