What you could have done was zoom in slower and aim the camera higher on the first shot.

I think this film was decent, however The angles for the shots could have been better and the story overall was a little bland. Next time maybe try adding a little more depth into the story on like maybe with the kid listened to music at such a high volume constantly, kind of making it like a narrative.

It was alright, not the best

I think this film was great in my opinion.

This is actually a pretty well conceived piece. I think you could have tightened up the cuts and delivered the message in about half the time. You could have used some better microphones. It was well exposed and was an effective PSA.